Seriously, do you feel any pride in this?
This was so bad, It makes me thing you were on acid during the entire process of "animating"
Quality; Epicly bad.
Audio; I think my ears stopped bleeding.
Please, good sir/miss. Stick to watching animations and try to learn something from it.
Uploading random crap, like this unfortunatly is, will only get you one thing; BLAMS BLAMS and more BLAMS.
I'm a sir. 100% male. All natural.
A little fun. But it seems too unfinished to get any high ratings.
You have a story to tell, but you lack on the animating parts. OH! and try not to eat your microphone :)
Why would you upload an unfinished project???
Well, not bad... but...
I hope that's not the final product thogh..
-characters need serparating and line cliches occur.
- for uploading something that obiously need rework.
(Hope that wasn't too harsh for yah... :P )
At the limited time I had to present as a class final, this was the best I could muster. As i mentioned in the description, this was the first narrative I've made in many years. I agree it needs a lot of repolishing, but it was good enough to pass the class. My line of narrative, plot mechanics, editing and animation style has changed since then. But I appreciate the critique. ;)
Ok, I personally have a thing for OP's and ED's in general, and I believe this is because I work with kara timing them on a regular basis. xD
Believe me when I say I've seen quite a few OP's in my life, and this is some pretty decent work! Are you planning to make this into a full fledged series? That sounds pretty awesome! However, for a flash, I don't think you need a long intro, as this one, but maybe more along 30 seconds? I dunno, its just my thoughts. Also, if you plan on it to follow the Anime genre, why not add some karaoke FX to it?
Also, you could add credits to each character as they appear on screen?
Well, I hope this could be of use, and I'll be looking forwards to see how you follow this one up ^^,
Thanks for the review! I do plan on following this up with at least the first episode. I will make another opening with a little less footage :P Thanks for the advice :)
Very Good job with this one!
I know people say that every Flash should have colors, but this is a excellent example to prove the opposite.
Very well made, although I noticed a few "bugs" here and there, but nothing bad worth mentioning ^^,
Music were pretty cool, and I liked the way it switched between English and Japanese. Whats the name of the song?
I'll be looking forward to your new work with great expectations ^^,
Hey thanks :D and the song is called life is like a boat by Rei fu.
Not bad for me who actually understood what were written, but this video might not get a good rating by people who doesn't understand Japanese.
Perhaps you could make a v2.0 with english text for the rest of the world?
Other than that, it were pretty decent ^^,
Keep ut the good work!
Nice job on the lip-synch there.
Music were cool, and the animation in general were above average. Perhaps a bit much of the same movement, but all in all, a cool video.
Thanks a lot! :D
Yeah, the movement is non-stop and repetitive, but that's pretty much what how it's meant to be. X3
This was pretty good flash.
Animation were good, and funny at times.
One thing and a tip for further reference. For "lightsaber" effects there are a few tutorials on YouTube on how to make them look awesome (using amongst others Gaussian blur) Not that your effects didn't look good, but they could be better...
The music however is a bit annoying. but this is perhaps just my opinion, and a matter of musical preference. hence I didn't count this in my rating.
Keep up the good work, and remember practice makes perfect!
I'll be looking forward to your future works.
Now I didn't see that coming!
Me and my friend here laughed our asses off, especially since we both remember the movie from our childood.
I'll give you a seven for the lipsync, but Its a bit short, and the loot is a little annoying. Try and be a little more creative with the body motion as well.
Remember; Practice makes perfect!
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