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[Conartist]

A little fun. But it seems too unfinished to get any high ratings.
You have a story to tell, but you lack on the animating parts. OH! and try not to eat your microphone :)

Kubopix responds:

lol!

[Perilous Encounter]

Well, not bad... but...
I hope that's not the final product thogh..

+Funny ending
+ok storyline
-characters need serparating and line cliches occur.
- for uploading something that obiously need rework.

(Hope that wasn't too harsh for yah... :P )

kobalt3 responds:

At the limited time I had to present as a class final, this was the best I could muster. As i mentioned in the description, this was the first narrative I've made in many years. I agree it needs a lot of repolishing, but it was good enough to pass the class. My line of narrative, plot mechanics, editing and animation style has changed since then. But I appreciate the critique. ;)

[My Awesome Life OP]

Awesome!

Ok, I personally have a thing for OP's and ED's in general, and I believe this is because I work with kara timing them on a regular basis. xD

Believe me when I say I've seen quite a few OP's in my life, and this is some pretty decent work! Are you planning to make this into a full fledged series? That sounds pretty awesome! However, for a flash, I don't think you need a long intro, as this one, but maybe more along 30 seconds? I dunno, its just my thoughts. Also, if you plan on it to follow the Anime genre, why not add some karaoke FX to it?

Also, you could add credits to each character as they appear on screen?

Well, I hope this could be of use, and I'll be looking forwards to see how you follow this one up ^^,

XiaoxiaoGOD responds:

Thanks for the review! I do plan on following this up with at least the first episode. I will make another opening with a little less footage :P Thanks for the advice :)

[Life is Like a Boat]

Very Good!

Very Good job with this one!
I know people say that every Flash should have colors, but this is a excellent example to prove the opposite.

Very well made, although I noticed a few "bugs" here and there, but nothing bad worth mentioning ^^,

Music were pretty cool, and I liked the way it switched between English and Japanese. Whats the name of the song?

I'll be looking forward to your new work with great expectations ^^,

XiaoxiaoGOD responds:

Hey thanks :D and the song is called life is like a boat by Rei fu.

[FemPHLiM Fukkireta]

Cool!

Nice job on the lip-synch there.
Music were cool, and the animation in general were above average. Perhaps a bit much of the same movement, but all in all, a cool video.

phlim2 responds:

Thanks a lot! :D
Yeah, the movement is non-stop and repetitive, but that's pretty much what how it's meant to be. X3

[sam and sasuke in concert]

Not bad

Not bad at all.

Especially if this is your first flash.
For that, you get 4/5 and 8/10 in my book

I'll be looking forward to your future work with great expectation

Remember that Greatness takes time, patience, time, creativity, time and a dash of luck!

Ankoku-Annie responds:

i know that
and well, i wil make better animations soon

i think n_nU

[The Anger of Animation 3]

Sweet!

This is WAY better that the Animation VS Animator series.
Animation is great, sound effects could perhaps be a little better, but still, a good 10.

On thing I would love to see in the future, is a game of this type....

KobraEditing responds:

Someone already made a game for AvA...thanks!